Anyone Willing to Look at my TOP 10?

[teeezyyy]

This is my first time applying and I looked around this forum for the best way to write the impact, but I'm not sure if I'm conveying everything I could effectively. If anyone (preferably someone accepted into UofC) is willing to read my top 10, please pm me!! I'll pay for your time! 

Thank you <3

[akrobatik]

I will happily. Would you look at mine too? I'll inbox you my email address.