Anyone willing to look over my essay?

[andnowmywatchbegins 23]

Looking for anyone to help me out and edit my essay or offer and constructive criticisms on where I could improve. I'm willing to return the favour. 

 

Thanks

[akrobatik 23]

I am happy to look over your essay. This is my second time applying, I haven't decided how much I'm going to change my essay from last year but I'd be happy to share mine too  DM me 

[Bambi 1,868]

Send. 

[Dalhousie23 50]

Send it to me 

[fluffybunnyyyyy 32]

If you want, I don’t mind reading it!

[DrDre 7]

Would be happy to read it as well