Question about listing things in PS

[James23]

Hey, I was just wondering if anyone knows whether it's ok to write names in the PS without explaining who they are. I have them in my Work/Activities section. I have the names of some of my supervisors in the PS but don't have the space to explain much about them. I tried taking out the names but it makes the paragraph sound strange.

 

As a general rule, is it ok to mention things in the PS as long as they are in the work/activities? I was thinking if the admission committee member reads the PS and work/activities together it'd be ok, but what if the admission committee seperates all the documents and different people read different ones.

[hmmmm]

I reckon each explanation should make sense indepndently. And when mentioning names I would probably do so only in a context which gives an idea of my relationship with that person.