Should I write this in my submission essay?

[cantcatchme]

Hi

I was just wondering if this is appropriate to write in my submission essay.

I had a bad experience with a doctor when I was little - He scared the crap out of my mom by telling her horror stories of a disease that my little sister had.

They weren't even really true, they were very very very extreme cases that were not likely to happen to my sister, but he made it sound like all those things would happen.

I was thinking of writing how this has impacted my life and how I plan on being a more sensitive doctor.

 

Good/bad idea?

 

Suggestions?

[emma3]

Maybe if you didn't say that the doctor scared you but instead just put that your sister was in the hospital when she was younger and it made you want to be a doctor who was sensitive and understanding or something.. i dont think i would say anything negative though.. just my thoughts!