apache Posted May 5, 2012 Report Share Posted May 5, 2012 besides, i'm a hack anyways, wouldntyasay? that's the theme to my meta-narrative If so, come here more often. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
future_doc Posted May 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2012 Not a hack, highly innovative writer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
future_doc Posted May 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2012 May all have an enjoyable evening. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Birdy Posted May 5, 2012 Report Share Posted May 5, 2012 And may you have one too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyGPAsucks Posted May 5, 2012 Report Share Posted May 5, 2012 Are you short too, or not? Nope, short posts compensate for height Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyGPAsucks Posted May 5, 2012 Report Share Posted May 5, 2012 Six words are not that difficult. If you choose your words carefully. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
future_doc Posted May 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2012 You do choose your words carefully. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Birdy Posted May 5, 2012 Report Share Posted May 5, 2012 I prefer to choose words adventurously. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
future_doc Posted May 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 5, 2012 I have not seen any though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apache Posted May 6, 2012 Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 but if u wrote a volumes amount and we do a stochastic account and find a normal distribution curve guess, that's random, but not unpredictable we all regress to normal distribution to have a higher n value think i'm adventurous, that's self deception in the end, an extensive collection projects illusion i'm antithetically expeditious if you read my writing extensively you'll find common motifs, rather repetitious just like the chess grand masters who see patterns to others concealed it's just rote repetition, volumes ammunition unrecognizable second standard deviations seem random but over time, i'm still systemic be empathetic, even algorithmic expression fails at it's final objective, capricious adventurousness but spotting metaphorical linguistic motor control akin to automation of chord progressions you have read a whole lot and who cares, or has attention? I prefer to choose words adventurously. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
future_doc Posted May 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 Birdy follow wordsteps of our muse and enter adventurous world of words. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyGPAsucks Posted May 6, 2012 Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 You guys are all so poetic It makes my stuff look pathetic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
future_doc Posted May 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 Because you say your GPA sucks. There is a poet inside you! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MyGPAsucks Posted May 6, 2012 Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 Roses are red, violet are blue MyGPAsucks and my poetry does too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
future_doc Posted May 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 You: poet, now you know it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedLily Posted May 6, 2012 Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 Oooh, rhymes? They can be difficult, but you enjoy the end result! Amazing, the length of some rhymes, some of you can multiple times! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apache Posted May 6, 2012 Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 my rhymes are sublime, cheery, fine i'm trading poetry sore some good kinetics the lyrics gotta mean something, ya but the main concern is phonetics low ratios, dissonance's has no flow listen to the deftones, you'll know but i'm aiming for something nonsensical with maybe some semantics, but whimsical an ideological shift when coupling riffs musics about having fun, just chill there's no need to be serious have a tab, lets get delirious because the sound im thinking of will make you forget your problems no need to be so serious just sing along, dance, be free and enjoy each others lovely company this is a love song everybody so grab someone, and sing along la la la la la la i think everyone here's on lsd Roses are red, violet are blueMyGPAsucks and my poetry does too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedLily Posted May 6, 2012 Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 My rhyming capabilities are not extensive Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
future_doc Posted May 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 It is not necessary to rhyme. Perhaps it will come in time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
future_doc Posted May 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 RedLily, you are doing quite fine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apache Posted May 6, 2012 Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 i'm pretty sure these are lyrics i'll do part a an b a continuing story, metaphor of humanity boys and girls, i hate logic follow it round, see a tautology? why is the world so mysterious but on the other hand serious i hate being so damn ambitious because i love being a hedonist so i'm calling for a reform societies superficial puritan character lacks candour if i'm nearing going on eminent and i do my job perfectly not a trace of mistake, serendipity? i think not, my records written on time, the measure of excellence so why does the public care if i do lsd, while beaching or if im reaching for her the younger one, in the bikini she split the stuff with me what do i have to be? to have fun, in the sun with a beautiful girl, on vacation we know the answer: nicolas sarkozy us politicians, we need some privacy it's respect, decency, a common courtesy and please don't look at me as if some sort of philistine i know behind your fake decency we're all a little bit kinky in one way or another, individually we just have this moral projection of socially constructed morality, be bad expect a slap on your wrist even though if we were anonymous we'd find just how much, ubiquitously are all a little freaky, tweaked but if there were openness, transparency would we embrace our lascivious desires crazy ideas, desire for cheerful apathy not the kind seen with melancholy but something closer to inner release without fear of judgment, boxed insanity i've been to festivals like this and you get a taste, unadulterated of what is true, open, humanity surprisingly, no fighting, just love, harmony people with an aura of positivity it's such a joy to see the city, contrarily, is so angry screw politics, I'm climbing a mountain live simply, guess that's a hippy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
future_doc Posted May 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 hippies of byegone era did abound alas, now gone with the dinosaurs or too old to be meaningful. Today, materialis, survival to pay bills and so to keep wolves away. Financially, premeds live on the edge. Who said life is fair, but hey, life is to be lived, we can cope, survie and thrive and we relentless pursue our dreams. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
apache Posted May 6, 2012 Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 i'm not concerned with fiat currencies corrupt central banking monopolies, we're par print more money, inflation, no way i'm not sitting on cash money it has value, we communally agree that's why paper is power most people don't know any history the origin of money lenders, venice was where christians dodged the bible and invented the bond, interest avoided the jewish lenders were now excluded few hundred years later, virtual paper is my chosen medium of protest i know tax law, we cheat so monetary, manipulation, i've no beef i've an extensive education in corruption legally of course, follow the rules avoid being screwed, taxman won't bother you're practically in on it too my only plea, oh God please banish the morality police, paternalistic restriction the asterisk we slap on "freedom" maybe that's why i like mexico the corruptions much honest, even transparent here it's surreptitious, something that's esoteric but put together the right sentences and suddenly, illegal transforms into whatever we only prosecute the uneducated, poor you eggheads aren't worth the time the prosecutors gotta meet the quota to get that big fat bonus so you're a waste of time convicting you, payoffs not very high since you'd waste a whole week actually mounting a defense, still then there's no guarantee of another conviction you'll probably countersue, and cause friction so we'll take these guys here put 3 in a day, yay come december 31st, the prosecutors ecstatic that bonus cheque, it's registered mail shortly delivered, for miscarriages of justice that while malicious, is easy business hippies of byegone era did aboundalas, now gone with the dinosaurs or too old to be meaningful. Today, materialis, survival to pay bills and so to keep wolves away. Financially, premeds live on the edge. Who said life is fair, but hey, life is to be lived, we can cope, survie and thrive and we relentless pursue our dreams. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bambi Posted May 6, 2012 Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 muse87 you are really so impressive. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
future_doc Posted May 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 6, 2012 Indeed, a breath of fresh air as I have said before here. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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